Luishui Lake: A New Pearl in My Hometown

[6] If you could change one important thing in your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

The Lushui Lake in my hometown was formed due to the experimental dam and power plant built in the earlier years of China, which is one of the most important treasure my beloved hometown possesses and the one I desire to change.

There are all sorts of fishes and shrimps living in the unpolluted water of the lake, which offers a nice resource for fishery. However, the current fishing goes without demanding administration and over fishing might endanger further development. Therefore, it's urgent to set up regulation for the fishers and encourage them to preserve their traditional food made from fish and devise new dishes, which will contribute to the tourism I would propel.

The small islands on the lake, which were small hills when the damn wasn't built, are now habitats of all kinds of birds. The plants on the island are wild but given some interference will be attractive to those citizens who have long been under the roof of skyscrapers. The green water, yellow soil, red rocks, green trees, white birds and the blue sky will make the lake a big hit in the tourism market. There are not enough dinghies and boats for the travelers now and the lake is still of no reputation. An investment of advertisements for the lake must be made as soon as possible.

Near the dam, it's convenient to set up equipments for entertainment, which provides the residents near here and the tourists great fun, erasing their tire after work or long trips. Now there are swimmers coming in the summer, but the security is not ensured. As the water guards are employed and more equipments for water exercises are ready for renting, more and more people would like to come. Then the fishermen could sell their delicious food when they are hungry after playing in the water.

The lake will enhance the local economy by providing fishery, tourism and entertainment. Given proper management, it will prosper, yielding more jobs for local youth, without polluting our environment. Without any doubt, it will surely become a new pearl in my hometown.

30 min, 349 words.
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